初中英语总复习分类写作高分范文赏析---记叙文写人篇

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初中英语总复习分类写作高分范文赏析---记叙文写人篇

【初中英语】初中英语总复习分类写作高分范文赏析

第一部分：记叙文--写人篇（3）

朋友与老师

范文1

My Good Friend

My good friend is Lisa. She comes from Canada. We are both studying in Dongfang Middle School.

She is tall and lovely with blond hair. She is a funny girl, who often tells jokes to make you laugh. She does well in English, so I often ask her questions about English. Lisa is good at dancing, too. She won many prizes in the dancing competition. We share many interesting things with each other.

This is my good friend. I am very lucky to have such a friend.

参考译文

我的好朋友

我的好朋友叫丽萨.她来自加拿大.我们俩都在东方中学上学.

她很高,很可爱,还有一头金色的头发.她是一个很有趣的女孩,经常说笑话来逗别人笑.她英语学得很好,所以我经常问她关于英语的问题.丽萨也很擅长跳舞.她在跳舞比赛中赢过很多奖.我们互相分享很多有趣的事情.

这就是我的好朋友.我非常幸运能交到这样一个朋友.

亮点词汇

1 lovely /adj.可爱的

2 blond /adj.金色的

3 funny /adj.有趣的；搞笑的

4 tell jokes 讲笑话

5 question /n.问题

6 competition /n.比赛

出彩句型

1 She does well in...她擅长·.....

2 I ask her questions about...我问她关于···.··的问题.

3 She won many prizes in...competition.她在······比赛中赢过很多奖.

4 We share...with each other.我们互相分享··...

5 I am very lucky to...我非常幸运··....

高分点评

本文采用“总一分一总”的结构,首段先总述了Lisa的情况,第二段详细描述 Lisa的各方面特点,最后再总结,详略得当,条理清晰.作者对短语的运用非常娴熟,如“tell jokes”“won many prizes”等,都恰如其分地表达出了人物的特点,人物形象生动.

范文2

My Favorite Teacher

Miss Ye is my favorite teacher, who is now 25 years old. She is from Guangdong Province. She is a beautiful lady, and she often has a smile on her face.

She does a great job in teaching. She can skillfully get the students involved in listening to her and doing exercises. Those topics that she introduces in the class can always catch the eye of students. Therefore, lots of students love to take her classes. Not only does she do well in classes, but also she is good at music. Between the classes, she sometimes plays a small piece of music, which is very helpful for us to relax our minds.

Isn't she wonderful? We all like her very much.

参考译文

我最喜欢的老师

叶老师是我最喜欢的老师,她现在25岁.她来自广东省.她是一位漂亮的女士,她的脸上经常挂着笑容.

她教书教得很好.她能巧妙地让学生专心听讲,认真做练习.她在课堂上介绍的那些话题总是能吸引学生的注意.因此,很多学生都喜欢上她的课.她不仅课上得好,也很擅长音乐.在课间的时候,她有时会弹一小段音乐,这对放松我们的头脑很有帮助.

她是不是很棒?我们都非常喜欢她.

亮点词汇

1 skillfully/adv.巧妙地；精巧地

2 involved /adj.参与其中的；涉及的

3 topic /n.主题；话题

4 introduce /v.介绍

5 catch the eye of...吸引·····的注意